narrative

 Start writing here:  One day there was two boys Antzel and Tipi going for a little walk at the beach. As they were going for a swim and they went so deep they couldn’t stand so they were shouting for help, but because they were so far into the water no one could hear them. Time was going past and still nothing, then Anzel said “ we should swim closer to them and hopefully they would hear us!”. Good idea Antzel said Tipi, to be continue.