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Choose It Narrative
Today you will be writing a narrative. In order to help you get started,
I selected some pictures for you to use in your writing.
You must use ONE picture.
I selected some pictures for you to use in your writing.
You must use ONE picture.
When you have decided which picture you
want to use, delete the other 4 and enlarge
the picture you have chosen.
want to use, delete the other 4 and enlarge
the picture you have chosen.
Don’t forget! A narrative needs to have
the TOPS elements.
the TOPS elements.
You will be creating a plot line after your story is complete.
This may help you add more details into your story before publishing.
This may help you add more details into your story before publishing.
You may use this if you need. YOU DO NOT HAVE to use this.
Make a plan that suits you.
Make a plan that suits you.
Begin Writing Here: One Tuesday me and my friends called Moui, Siosiua, Jerry, Ozzy.
i went to my friends house to pick up them to ask if they wanted to come for a walk
they said ok i have to ask my mum first then in said ok then i said to moui do you
want to pick up Siosiua and Ozzy he said yeah of course then we walked to there
house i said to them wanna come for a walk they said the same thing what Moui
said then we went to Jerry’s house to pick him up he already asked so i asked them
should we go for a walk around the forest or the beach they said forest at the same
time i said ok let's go have a water first then we had a water then we went down
they were slippery stairs we walked down them we tried to not fall we got to the
end of the stairs we went down we saw some birds flying and we saw a creek we
saw some beautiful birds but i don't know what there called they were colourful
then we saw some belones they were blue, perpull, red then we saw a and clown
in the middle of the forest i said boy’s stay behind me they said ok i said are you
ok clown he said yes then i said what you doing down here he or her said nothing
just looking at the creek i said the creek is wonder full aye he or she said yes it is
i said are you a girl or a boy he said i'm a boy he said i got some friends down
there do you want to come and play with me and my friends we said sure we all said
what's your friends names this is Sione, Osa, Rece, and devonte i said this is Jerry
Jerry say hi this is Moui Moui said hi then here’s Ozzy Ozzy say hi then last is
Siosiua you can call him siua for short if you want and my name is Caleb ok is there
a park down here yea there is just down there do you want to play something down
there boys they said yea what should we play down there um we will think about what
to play there's a basketball hop down there one of my friends have a basketball the
clown said i said what’s your name clown my name is John i said hi john then we walked
down there the park was nice it had swings and a slide and a toilet and a water
fountain wow this park is very nice aye boys yeah i'm going to play basketball
are you’s coming i said yea lets race there i said ok then i said 3 2 1 go then
Jerry was first then me second then siua therred then moui last its ok moui
being last it was just a race aye moui yea its not a real race moui said yea
lets go ask to play with them we all said ok then we walked over to asked hi
can we play with you’s please they said yea we're going to win they said i said
who’s going to start they said you’s can start because we're going to win were
the best in the world the clowns said we said ok then we got the ball and got a
three pointer we weren't cocky like them we were just play full people we just
like to play for fun we all said we got the last score then we said good game guys
you’s did well then the clown’s were mad they lost so they chased us then we ran so
fast they couldn't catch us we were to fast then we got out then moui fell the
clown’s were close then we picked up moui and said moui you got this just walk
it off then Moui ran because the clowns were very close then we got to the top
of the stairs then we ran across the road and i dropped them off back home
and we all said we're not going to chose that place again yea we should of
went to the beach but we had a great day the boys said yes maybe another
time we could go for a run next time boys ok yea ok then Caleb see you maybe
next time ok then see ya have a good day then boys that was a close one ok
then see ya bye then i went home and had a sleep then woke up then i
finished off the day. THE END
i went to my friends house to pick up them to ask if they wanted to come for a walk
they said ok i have to ask my mum first then in said ok then i said to moui do you
want to pick up Siosiua and Ozzy he said yeah of course then we walked to there
house i said to them wanna come for a walk they said the same thing what Moui
said then we went to Jerry’s house to pick him up he already asked so i asked them
should we go for a walk around the forest or the beach they said forest at the same
time i said ok let's go have a water first then we had a water then we went down
they were slippery stairs we walked down them we tried to not fall we got to the
end of the stairs we went down we saw some birds flying and we saw a creek we
saw some beautiful birds but i don't know what there called they were colourful
then we saw some belones they were blue, perpull, red then we saw a and clown
in the middle of the forest i said boy’s stay behind me they said ok i said are you
ok clown he said yes then i said what you doing down here he or her said nothing
just looking at the creek i said the creek is wonder full aye he or she said yes it is
i said are you a girl or a boy he said i'm a boy he said i got some friends down
there do you want to come and play with me and my friends we said sure we all said
what's your friends names this is Sione, Osa, Rece, and devonte i said this is Jerry
Jerry say hi this is Moui Moui said hi then here’s Ozzy Ozzy say hi then last is
Siosiua you can call him siua for short if you want and my name is Caleb ok is there
a park down here yea there is just down there do you want to play something down
there boys they said yea what should we play down there um we will think about what
to play there's a basketball hop down there one of my friends have a basketball the
clown said i said what’s your name clown my name is John i said hi john then we walked
down there the park was nice it had swings and a slide and a toilet and a water
fountain wow this park is very nice aye boys yeah i'm going to play basketball
are you’s coming i said yea lets race there i said ok then i said 3 2 1 go then
Jerry was first then me second then siua therred then moui last its ok moui
being last it was just a race aye moui yea its not a real race moui said yea
lets go ask to play with them we all said ok then we walked over to asked hi
can we play with you’s please they said yea we're going to win they said i said
who’s going to start they said you’s can start because we're going to win were
the best in the world the clowns said we said ok then we got the ball and got a
three pointer we weren't cocky like them we were just play full people we just
like to play for fun we all said we got the last score then we said good game guys
you’s did well then the clown’s were mad they lost so they chased us then we ran so
fast they couldn't catch us we were to fast then we got out then moui fell the
clown’s were close then we picked up moui and said moui you got this just walk
it off then Moui ran because the clowns were very close then we got to the top
of the stairs then we ran across the road and i dropped them off back home
and we all said we're not going to chose that place again yea we should of
went to the beach but we had a great day the boys said yes maybe another
time we could go for a run next time boys ok yea ok then Caleb see you maybe
next time ok then see ya have a good day then boys that was a close one ok
then see ya bye then i went home and had a sleep then woke up then i
finished off the day. THE END
Today we had a writing test i think i did very good hope you like it.
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